Writers Note (Final Draft):
As I came to the end of this piece I made final editing changes. I read my piece over and made corrections to punctuation and capitalization. I also added pictures to help my reader visualize the process.
The one thing I found challenging is wondering if I added enough details when it came to brushing your teeth. It seems like such as easy concept, but if you don’t include specific details your reader might not understand what you mean.
As I reread the piece I kept thinking about my details and if they made sense. This helped me decide what I needed to take out and what I needed to add.