Grandma's Challenge.

By: Furqan.Ahmed 



Luis: The main




Victor: Luis bigger





Cynthia: Luis and


Victor's Grandma.






...Character List...

Page: 1


"Ok Luis and Victor get up 


I Have a surprise for you


Both"Said their Mother.


They both raced to the 


breakfast table wondering 


about the surprise.


Page: 2

After eating their breakfast their Mom, asked them to go visit their Grandma, "Why Momy" Luis asked. "If you want your Gift, You have to do this" Said their Mother.

Page: 3


They both started their journey to their


grandma's house. They both were


excited but nervous because it was their


first time visiting their grandma's house


alone without their mom. "Here's the


Map, Use it if you are lost" Said Mrs.




Luis and Victor jumped


overthe over the leaves,


Around the Trees, And


throught the Spider webs,


To get to her grandma's




When Luis and Victor entered

the Forest the wind was too

heavy and angry that it was

too hard to walk. "I think the wind is running through trees and Lugging me backward forcing me to return back to my home, Why" Thinking and wonderign Luis.

Question: Why was the angry wind forcing Luis to go back to his Home?

Question: Why was the angry wind forcing Luis to go back to his Home?


Luis and Victor's Mother raced to the telephone and called Cynthia Luis and Victor's Grandma. "They both just entered the forest" Luis and victor's Mother bawled at the telephone to Grandma that her ear was nearly going to ignite.  

          Furqan.Ahmed, A native of Pakistan, He was 9 years old when he moved to United States. He has been here in United States for about 6 years. He had ESL, But now he is taking Writing Lab with his foremost and Incomparable teacher named Mr. Waters and his classmates.

          I was born in Pakistan, And lived in the cities of Lahor And Islamabad, These are one of the most famous and beautiful cities across pakistan. Quick Fact, The city Islamabad is one of richest and cleanest city through pakistan filled with skylines, And Islamabad is also the Capital of Pakistan. Islamabad also include the one of the biggest Airport in the world. The languages spoken are Punjabi, Pashto, Sindhi, Urdu, Balochi, Arabic, Urdu and many more.

          My family is filled with four compassionate people, One Sister, Mother and Father and of course myself. My Mother is so solicitous to me even If I do something horrible. My Sister is not my Sister WHY!, Because she is my Friend and we both take care of our family and our engaging Parents together. At the last, My Father is marvelous and stunning, But sometimes he gets a little bit austere, My father do this for my good and career that's why he is marvelous.

          Some of the Important and essential moments in my life are, My Countries (Pakistan and United States), My family, My friends, My Cousins and relatives, and also My Teacher's who taught me alot and helped me in everything. (One example is in front of you people Mr.Waters.)

One of My unbeatable Writting pieces Include (The Scary Blood, The Rain Magic, And The essay of Crispin).       


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